**Naatiya Ash,ar ** [Rule: Last Shair Key Akhri Harf Sey New Shair Post Kejiye]

[Hanafi Muslima]

Ya Rab Madine Pak mein Jana Naseeb ho

Jana Naseeb ho k aana naseeb na ho(Ameen)

 

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Na Dolat day na Sarwat de mujhe bas ye sa;adat day

Teray Qadmoon mein mar jaon mein roo roo kar Madine mein

 

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[سگِ عطار]

 

 

Namaz-e-Aqsa Mein Tha Yahi Sir, Ayaan Hoon Maana-e-Awal Aakhir

Keh Sar Ba Dasta They Pechey Hazir, Jo Saltanat Aagey Ker Gaye They

Az Imam-ul-Kalam Kalam-ul-Imam Imam-ul-Zamaan Ash-Shah Imam Ahmad Raza Khan (Alehrahmat-ur-Rahman)

 

Akhri Lafz "Ya"

[ata_ho_ghame_madina]

ya RAB dekha de aj ki ratt jalwa e HABEEB (salhoalhewaslm)

 

aik barr tu ata ho ziyarat RSAOOL( SLAHO ALHEWASLM) KI

 

 

NEXT LAFZ " YA"

[Abdur Rehman]

 

يا رب ميرى سوءٸ ھوءٸ تقدير جگا دے

آنکھيں مجھے دى ہيں تو مدينہ بھى دکھا دے

[Qadri student]

 

 

Wo MUHAMMAD bazmay aalam badshahy ins-o-jaan..`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*~`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*

Serwray konaen Sultany Arab Shahyumum..

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Ak din Jibril say khnay lgay Shahy Umum ..`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*`~*

 

tum ny dekha hay jhaan btlaou k kesay hain HUM..?

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Araz ki Jibril ny Aay Shahy din Aay Muhtram..

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Aap ka koi Mamasil hi nahi RAB ki Qasam.

 

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mera shair AK DIN JIBRIL say start hay ..starting may PIYRAY NABI ki tareef biyaan ki gaie hay jis k bageer shair mukamal nahi hota ..

Edited 27 جون 2008 by Qadri student

[Ghulam E Mustafa]

Momin unn ka kiya howa Allah uss ka ho gaya

kafir un say kiya phira Allah hee say phir gaya

[Hanafi Muslima]

 

Bilal Tujh per Nisaar jaon k khod Nabi ne Tujhe Kharidaa

Naseeb ho to Naseeb aisa ghulam ho to Ghulam aisa

 

[ata_ho_ghame_madina]

 

Bilal Tujh per Nisaar jaon k khod Nabi ne Tujhe Kharidaa

Naseeb ho to Naseeb aisa ghulam ho to Ghulam aisa

 

 

plz last word se start kia kerin

 

aya na hoga is terha husno shabab reiat per

 

gulshan e fatima key thy sary gulab reiat per

[سگِ عطار]

 

رحم فرمائیے یا شاہ  کہ اب تاب نہیں

 

تابکے خون رلائے غم ہجراں ہم کو

[Hanafi Muslima]

plz last word se start kia kerin

 

oh am really very sorry mjhe to bilkul pata nahi tha

[Hanafi Muslima]

Rota howa Jis dam mein Dare Yaar pay pohonchon

Us waqt mujhe Jalwae Mehboob dikha Day

[Hanafi Muslima]

Ya Rab dekha day aaj ki shab Jalwae Habeeb

Ik bar to ata ho Ziyarat Rasool ki

[ata_ho_ghame_madina]

ya RAB Madiney pakk mein jana naseeb ho

 

jana naseeb ho tu na ana naseeb ho .......

 

amenn)

 

next " wow"

[سگِ عطار]

وہی مجھے نظر آئیں جدھر نگاہ کروں

 

اُنھیں کا جلوہ رہے آشکار آنکھوں میں

[Abdur Rehman]

[Madinah_Madinah]

chun k mushkil word py end hony wala shair diya hy..........

 

hmmmmmmmm...........

lem me think......

[Karam Ho Ya Rasool Allah]

 

 

zaroorat say zayada maal wa doolaat hum ko na dena,

rahay bas app ki nazar e annayaat ya rasool allah

 

Edited 30 جون 2008 by Karam Ho Ya Rasool Allah

[Abdur Rehman]

Edited 30 جون 2008 by Saif ul Islam

[Karam Ho Ya Rasool Allah]

 

 

main soo jaoon ya mustafa kehtay kehtay,

khollay ankh sallay alla kehtay kehtay.....

Edited 30 جون 2008 by Karam Ho Ya Rasool Allah

[ata_ho_ghame_madina]

ya RAB wo shab bhi aye hamari hayat mein

 

hum bhi khen key ho gya dedar e MUSTAFA slhoalhewaslm

 

 

NEXT " YE"

Edited 1 جولائی 2008 by ata_ho_ghame_madina

[Karam Ho Ya Rasool Allah]

 

 

 

ye ezoo jalaal allah allah,ye oojo kamaal allah allah,

ye husan o jamaal allah allah,meraaj ko dulha jatay hain....

 

 

[Hanafi Muslima]

 

Nabi ki Naat ki Mefihl sajana ham na chorain gay

Ye Naara "Ya Rasool Allah " lagana ham na choraein gay

 

 

Edited 1 جولائی 2008 by Hanafi Muslima

[Hanafi Muslima]

Ya Sahib al Jamal Wa Ya Seyyedil Bashar

Minw Wajhikal Muneer laqad Noowiral Qamar

 

La yumki us Thana’oo kama kana Haquhoo

Ba’ad az Khuda Buzurg to’ee Qissa Mukhtasar

 

[Karam Ho Ya Rasool Allah]

 

 

 

roosiyahoon per hoon karam ay doo jahan kay tajdaar ,

apnay ghaam main apni ulfaat main rulaoo raaz raaz......

 

[Madinah_Madinah]

piyari behen, ye word "ZAar Zaar" hy ya "raz raz"..??

i thnk zaar zaar hoga......shayd typing me mstake hogai hy ap sy........

 

"Ra"

rah pur khaar hy kia hona hy.......

paaon afgar hy kia hona hy,

arey ooo mujrim e byparwa dekh

ser py talwar hy, kiya hona hy,