**Naatiya Ash,ar ** [Rule: Last Shair Key Akhri Harf Sey New Shair Post Kejiye]

[سگِ عطار]

Na Ker Ruswa-e-Rahmat Wasita Mahboob Ka Ya Rab

Yeh Mujrim Door Sey Aaya Hai Sun Ker Naam Rahmat Ka

 

Az Ustaz-e-Zaman Moulana Hassan Raza Khan (Aleh Rahma)

[Ussaid-e-Raza]

Ya Rab-e-Muhammad (Azawajal wa Sallahoaliwasalam) meri taqdeer jaga de

sehra-e-Madina mujhey aankhon se dikha de....

[Mudasir Yaseen]

Ya Rab meri soyee hu'ee taqdeer jaga de

Aankhen mujhe dee hain to Madina bhe dikhade

 

Aameeeeeeeeen

[Ussaid-e-Raza]

Ya Ilahi jab Raza Khawab-e-Giran se sar uthain

Dolat-e-baidar Ishq-e-Mustafa ka saath ho

 

(Azawajal-w-Sallahoaliwasalam-w-radiAllahanho)

[سگِ عطار]

 

Wallah Woh Sun Lein Gey Faryad Ko Pohnchein Gey

 

Itna Bhi Tu Hoo Koi Ik Aah Kerey Dil Sey

[Shareef Raza]

یادَ جاناں میں معاذ اللہ ہستی کی خبر

یادَ جاناں میں کسی سے آگہی اچھی نہیں

(مولانا اختر رضا خان)

[سگِ عطار]

 

نشان خسرو دیں دور کہ غلاموں کو

 

لوائےحمد کا پرچم بتا رہا ہوگا

[Ussaid-e-Raza]

ان پر درود جن کو ھجر تک کریں سلام

ان پر درود جن کو تحیت شجر کی ھے

[سگِ عطار]

یوں مجھ کو موت آئے تو کیا پوچھنا مرا

 

میں خاک پر نگاہ درِ یار کی طرف

[Mudasir Yaseen]

Faiz-e-Jaleel Khaleel se pouchho

Aag men Baagh lagaty ye hain

 

Wasslam

Edited 22 اگست 2007 by SHAH SHAREER MELE WALA

[Nazia]

 

Jab zuban say haal-e-dil app say hota hai

yeh dil bhut sokoon bhut qarar pata hai

 

Aur jab koye masla hamein darpesh hota hai

Tou bas laboo per app ka hi naam hota hai</H3><H3 style="MARGIN: 12pt 0in 3pt">

Hai ahsaan bhut meray ALLAH AZZ'WAJAL ka

Jo app ki pyari umaat mein hum gunahagaar ko rakha hai

 

Yeh chaand hai khiloona app kay palnay ka

Jidhar kartey ish'ara udhar taw'waf karta hai

 

Is kalaam ko apni BARGHA mein qabool kar lena

Hai kul aas'asa yeh hi jo is gunhagar nay likha hai

 

Edited 24 اگست 2007 by nazia

[Ubaid-e-Raza]

Is kalaam ko apni BARGHA mein qabool kar lena

Hai kul aas'asa yeh hi jo is gunhagar nay likha hai

. is topic main last word se 1 ya 2 shair post karne ki tarkeb hai.

 

Yaan bhi dagh sajda e taiba hai tamgha noor ka

 

Ae qamar! kia tere hi mathe hai teka noor ka

az imam e ahle sunnat

[Mudasir Yaseen]

 

Aankhon men aao, Dil men samao

Pardah uthaao , Jalwah Dikhaao

Hasrat zada ki , Piyare Duaa lo

Hasrat nikalo meri, Hasrat nikalo

 

Wasslam

[Nazia]

 

mujhey nahi pata tha sorry bcoz i m a new member of ths site

waroon qadam qadam pe k har dam hai jan-e-no

yeh rah-e-jaan fiza marey MULA k der ki hai

[Ubaid-e-Raza]

 

Ya rab tere mahboob ka jalwa nazar aye

Us noor e muhammad ka sarapa nazar aye

 

In aankhon ka werna koi masraf hi nahi hai

Sarkar tumhara rukh e zaiba nazar aye

[Mudasir Yaseen]

Ye Noori muztar, tera sanagar

Aur is ka ghar bhar ho hazr-e-dar

Apne gadagar ko dar par bulalo

Amn-o-Aman se hamen sarwar bulalo

[Ubaid-e-Raza]

 

Woh mehr mehr farma woh mah e aalam aara

Taroon ki cha,oon aya subh e shab e wiladat

[Mudasir Yaseen]

Tan men wo hay man men wo, Jaan men wo hay dil men wo

Aabadi men hay ban men wo, Sar men wo hay alan men wo

 

Wasslam

[Nazia]

 

Hum khaak hain or khaak hi mawa hai humara

khaki tou woh AADAM(AHLEY SALAM)jad-e-ala hai humara

 

hum khaak urayein gay jo woh khaak na paye

abaaad Raza jis pay Madina hai hamara

 

[Mudasir Yaseen]

Sister yahan par ashi'aar likhny ka rule ye hay ke jis "letter" (haraf) par shair khatam ho, agilee post men us "letter" jo shair start ho raha ho, wo likhna hay. Jaise aap ka shair "hamara" par end huwa hay, aur shair ka aakhiri "letter" hay "ALIF". Ab mujhy wo shair likhna hay jo "Alif" se start ho.

 

Ae noor-e-Khuda aa kar aankhon men sama jana

Ya dar pe bulla lena ye khuwab men aa jana

Ae parda nasheen dil ke parde men raha karna

Jab waqt-e-Naz'a aaye deedar atta karna

 

Umeed hay aap samajh ga'ee hoongi.

W'salam

[Nazia]

Sister yahan par ashi'aar likhny ka rule ye hay ke jis "letter" (haraf) par shair khatam ho, agilee post men us "letter" jo shair start ho raha ho, wo likhna hay. Jaise aap ka shair "hamara" par end huwa hay, aur shair ka aakhiri "letter" hay "ALIF". Ab mujhy wo shair likhna hay jo "Alif" se start ho.

 

Ae noor-e-Khuda aa kar aankhon men sama jana

Ya dar pe bulla lena ye khuwab men aa jana

Ae parda nasheen dil ke parde men raha karna

Jab waqt-e-Naz'a aaye deedar atta karna

 

Umeed hay aap samajh ga'ee hoongi.

W'salam

 

 

app nay akhir mein wo likha tha aghar urdu mein wo likhein tou "ha" per khatam nahi ho ga

yah ho sakta mein nay ghalat samjha ho app dekhyega 1 baar or

 

Us gali ka gada ho mein jis mein

mangtay taaj'dar phirtein hain

[Mudasir Yaseen]

Sister sorry, actually meri galti thee. Mein samajh nahin saka tha.

W'sslam

Edited 25 اگست 2007 by SHAH SHAREER MELE WALA

[Ubaid-e-Raza]

Sister men ne aakhiri "Letter" likha hay, "Word" nahin.

 

sister apne ashaar last letter se sahi likhe hain. brother ne meri ghalti ki darustagi farmai hai.. .. main ne last word likha tha. asal last letter hai..

 

Us gali ka gada ho mein jis mein

mangtay taaj'dar phirtein hain

 

نظر میں دولھا کے پیارے جلوے حیاء سے محراب سر جھکائے

 

سیاہ پردے کے منھ پر آنچل تجلئ ذات بحت سے تھے

[Mudasir Yaseen]

Ye aik jaan kiya hay agar hon karoron

Tere naam par sab ko wara karoon mein

[Ubaid-e-Raza]

نماز اقصیٰ میں تھا یہی سر عیاں ہوں معنئِ اول آخر

 

کہ دست بستہ ہیں پیچھے حاضر جو سلطنت آ ٓگے کر گئے تھے