I WOULD VENTURE TO SUGGEST A COUPLE OF CORRECTIONS IN THE URDU & ENGLISH TRANSLATION OF THE FOLLOWING LINES / WORDS:
-- "Bih bar een jan-e mushtaqam bih aanja" [Persian]
"Meri is mushtaq jaan ko wahan leja" [urdu]
"Carry my pining soul over there"
-- "Bestove" should be corrected to read "bestow'
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